A few days ago, I heard that one of my favourite authors was offering feedback on story projects. Curious to see if I could get feedback on my story, I sent an email. Given the author’s fame and the fact that my project was a children’s story, which was outside their usual field, I didn’t expect a reply. I sent the email more out of admiration than anything else.

To my surprise, the next day I received a short reply: “Yes, please send it!” I was thrilled and grateful to have received a response.

The story I sent was about a baby bird experiencing conflict with the adult bird protecting it, aiming to comfort children dealing with immature adults. The story included some of my personal experiences.

After getting permission, I excitedly attached my work and sent it. But then I started feeling anxious about receiving feedback. I worried the critique might be harsh since I had specifically asked for feedback. As it was my personal story, I suddenly felt very self-conscious. Expecting a delayed response due to the author’s busy schedule, I was again surprised to receive feedback the very next day.

The feedback was concise and without any embellishment or additional questions. It was direct and to the point: “It’s overly autobiographical.”

I agreed, but it still stung. I initially felt upset, but after reading it a second and third time, I began to see the constructive points. It wasn’t a total failure.

I replied with my thanks and, feeling a bit bold, sent another story for feedback. Now I’m wondering if I should have done that. I need to think of ways to express my gratitude.